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Avery Burns's avatar

Watch the ashes

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Jeff's avatar

Good fuckin' poem or, to be more precise, good poem about fuckin'. I write about everything from politics to my dog Snuffy to the Infinite realm of the Unified Field. I have never written a fuck poem because I have not, until now, understood fucking. Oh, and I don't believe the truths derived "in canibus veritas."

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Amelia Adams's avatar

Thanks for reading and commenting. Maybe one day you’ll write a fuck poem of your own. :-)

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Frederic Poag's avatar

Love the writing. As always great phrases especially the sock out of the dryer and the “glass of gasoline”.

Though if I’m being honest I was hoping this was a pictorial spread given the title. ;) :P :D LOL

Great piece. :)

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Amelia Adams's avatar

Thanks for reading; I’m glad you liked it.

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Ben Woestenburg's avatar

Whoa! That is amazing! The title dragged me in and then from there, I got lost in the ministration of your words. Smart, mesmerizing, fruitful and powerful. I got pulled in the depth of this and didn't want to let go.

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Amelia Adams's avatar

Thanks so much for reading it and offering those kind words. I’m glad you enjoyed it; it was fun to write.

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